[Intro]
[Verse 1]
I heard a guitar play with heartstrings
I saw the Reaper wearing a silver ring
She was the god of love
& he was born with horns
Life's a fairytale
They lived in wonder world
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me
The life of you is the death of me
It's our RIP anniversary
The life of you is the death of me
[Verse 2]
You'll never fall in love, you're such a tragedy
You got handcuffed by a shining ring
You're black nails paint red when you touch her
Bloodstains on my teeth and my tee shirt
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me
The life of you is the death of me
It's our RIP anniversary
The life of you is the death of me
[Bridge]
She was the god of love
& he was born with horns
Life's a fairytale
They lived in wonder world
She was the god of love
& he was born with horns
Life's a fairytale
They lived in wonder world
/
She's the girl I love / an Angel
& im a cursed art / devil / boy with
(a) love story
Folklore/legends / altar
Or just change to "loves' a fairytale/_"
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me (death of me)
The life of you is the death of me (death of me)
It's our RIP anniversary (-versasry)
The life of you is the death of me (the death of me)
[Outro]
(only guit solo)
/
This is the end of you and me (lik 1stTrack teasing "ending" -bornhorns,idontloveme)
/
You-oo-oo / Oo-oo you are the death of me-eh
RIP anniversary
The life of you are the death of me
/
The life of you are the death of me
RIP anniversary
- (lik ifellinlovewsmneishldnthv outro "teenage dirtbag")
/
The life of you is the death of me-eh
The life of you is the death of me
/
This is the end of you & me [Brdge?]
The written prophecy
=1-Liner lik (21stvamp-ulgy-mainstrm*?-ilikeme)
=2-measure chord change - dropdown sparse
Oh wait but u need a repeated line though..
/
You are the death of me
[Pre-Chorus]
I can't live without you
But I die with you in this prophecy
[Pre]
I can't live without you
But I'll die with you, every life
I can't live without you (here) but
I die in every life with you / I die with you if/when you say u do/say/feel it too
I can't live without you here but / with me / by/in/on/& me /
But I die in every life with you
/But I'll die with you in every life I'll say
/ But I'll die with you to/by the words that I say
/ But I [Up23] die with you (every life/night/till i..) I swear
/..no/ I/he said / I said I couldn't live without you / here but
But I can't promise/tell ../ say / dont say / I die promise.. / shut ur mouth / kiss
But I die every/ in(pronounce 'n") every life for/with you-oo-oo-oo (mel boislie.pre)
[Pre]
I can't live without you (with/in/on me/lately/baby/I said/you know) but
/ but I die for you ..screaming
I'll die on/with my last breath screaming / with a..
/
I can't live without-eh you oo-oo
But I die every night with you
/ But I'll scream till I die for you
/
I can't live without-eh you-oo-yea-eah/-buh-uht
I die ..heard/tell/scream/ask/he said/saying/written?/speak/kno?/yell/howl..
[...]
/
I dont wanna live without you
But I can't breathe around you
/
I know I never said / dont ever say "I love you" but
I can't live without you
/
[Pre] instrumental+adlibs (stay.kid,awfuleverafter,atleadiknourname,down,jumpsuit.brdg,anthem2,emogrl.brdg,5150,wannab,mainstrm? / ay., loverace, cncrt, boislie, loveituhtme) ? or lik (godsvme, mainstrm..)?
[Bridge] (down*(jumpsuit,orgnlme,splitpill,cncrt, etc.),mainstrm,ulgy,emogrl,loverace,morethanlife,boislie..)
She was the god of love
& he was born with horns
Life's a fairytale
They lived in wonder world
/
/
[Instrumental Breakdown + adlibs (lik RIPAnniversary, emogrl, atleastiknourname, 21stvamp, cncrt)]
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me-eh
The life of you is the death of me-eh
It's our RIP anniversar-ay-eh
The life of you is the death of me
Small gap btwn "of > me" creates hop between notes
Deat ^of^ me-heh
[Verse 2]
You'll never fall in lo-ove, you're such a tragedy-ee
You got handcu-ughffed by a shining ring-ing
(loverace,godsvme,down,maybe,emogrl,mainstrm,anglsdmns,nthnginsde,cncrt,boislie,)
..lonely
I want u to just actually kill me? / ..touch/hands/heart/skin..kill me slowly
/
You're black nails paint reh-hed when you tou-uch her-er
Bloodstains on my teeth and my tee-ee shirt
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me-eh
The life of you is the death of me-eh
It's our RIP anniversar-ay-eh
The life of you is the death of me
The life of you is the death of me-eh
The life of you is the death of me-eh
It's our RIP anniversar-ay-eh
The life of you is the death of me
Guit solo? (+atleastiknourname)
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me-eh (death of me-eh)
The life of you is the death of me-eh (death of me-eh)
It's our RIP anniversar-ay-eh (ee-yeah-eh / verser-eh-ay)
The life of you is the death of me (death of me) + ?-heh*[soft note Landing on B1 of Bridge - same pitch note as previous note]?
+ Last C' bckgrd voc.s lik (mainstream)
[Outro]
Oo-oo you are the death of me-eh
RIP anniversary
The life of you are the death of me
/
The life of you are the death of me
RIP anniversary
/
[Bridge] (+lwymmd.bdrge) <-- ?❌ (ulgy,21stvamp,loverace) <-- no u actually need it 'end' (kissmewrldend,ulgy)
This is the end of you & me-ee
The(/a) written prophecy-e-e-e
This is the end of you & me-e
The written(/it's our) prophecy(-e / -5x e's) / it's our destiny
Hv this rly smooth pitch as lik (nothing inside)'s C'/Outro? where the high notes are "end(+1st'&')"+"pro-"
Do lik pitch ending 1st Half Up, 2ndHalf down, lik (born horns)
Pronounce prophecy w an extra note in front lik "hyprophecy"?
/ hypocrisy
[QuadRapB3Upstream4>1][Trio/QuadUp2 Up41 Quad/FiveRapidUp2]
[B234Up4>1][TrioUp2Up4>3]
OR ✅ [B234Up4>1, TrioUp2 Up41 QuadRapUp2][B234Up4>1(OR Up4 homenote pitch), TrioUp2 Up4123] - Reference on top of (godsvme).outro
Add B1 "Mmh"s (emogrl) or "oh!" (Mainstream)
Hv prod switch up to the EvenlySpaced to simulate tht falling feeling? (emogrl, hangover, mainstream, sidnancy)
Im imagining lik a rly choir layered lik w lots of background reverb or lik radio-voice thin-ish on top of (emogrl.post)
[Chorus]
The life of you is the death of me
The life of you is the death of me
It's our RIP anniversary
The life of you is the death of me
(oo-oo u r the death of me-eh)?
[Outro]
Close ur eyes, say my name, summon the black parade
Close ur eyes, say my name, summon the black parade
/ repeat bridge again?
Her hair in my hair with her tongue's out
Black lipstick stained in my mouth
Drum intro - (boislie,ulgy,mainstrm,kissmewrldending,anthem2,crashburn,howcldudothis..)
Guit Slide Fx
Drone guitar chord before C' (knife pillow,mainstrm,wannab)
GuitResolvingOutro lik (ugly,anthem2,titletrack etc.) I wanna lik (hangovrcure.outro) bass note outro
Guitar /Bass FX/slide / Cymbal Slide to C' (mainstrm,ulgy)
Drums-
Vguit- B1Up2 + B2Up3//Up1B3 - depending on it being a super cliche love song?(emogrl,all4nthngiminluv,|payphone,mrbrght,sunflwer,rome&julit.popslutz)?
+ the fact tht ur C' is tht (title track,21stvamp,ulgy,whatage) chords
- u cn hv em as diff.Chords in C' lik (whatage)
- but I think u'll b lik (mainstrm,whatage,mrbrght)VRiff of just B1' bass note not B1Up2bassnotes & B24'highnotes (+cncrt,titletrck) for these QuadRapidStreamToUp4 V'mels' & bc it hs to b straight clean to matches for ur C' DwnDwndwnupupup mel' + tht same 2 notes heartache these riffs all hv
+ (godsv/mainstrm) starts w B1Up1 drone note ; (titletrack/cncrt/lvituhtme) starts w B2 to B4s ; (mrbrght,whyruhere,irlywshiht8u,lvulikiusedto,nothinginsid,sweetchild?what'sage,banyan) starts w B13 bass notes & riff changes throughout song
(mainstrm,godsvme) B1Up2 Bassnotes (mrbrght,hangover,whatage)B2high+Intro2ndHalfDrums (emogrl,ithinkok,sweetchild,loverace.C'-hangvr.C'-cncrt.intro) Up1high <-- but it also seems lik it's connected to tht (emogrl.postC') GuitMel'
Oh wow.. so (cncrt.intro) Riff also hd the Up1high.. this is the key.. cause (cncrt) hd brdge B12Guit same as (ulgy)
Wait if (sk8r,ulgy)'s riff's high note was B2.. then wouldn't ur Riff hv to match up too?
Wait how is (cncrt) Up1 then?
(cncrt,godsvme,bloodyval,mrbrght,wannabe,hangovr,whyruhere,myex,ithinkok) I think u need to follow the 3chords only thing. + B2High
+ (hangover-cncrt) kinda hs the same RapidDuo bass thing going on
U kno what ow tht I think bout it maybe u shld hv the (+whatage,banyan,whyruhere) ArpRiff instead?
(cncrt,whyruhere,ithinkok,godsvme,betteroffdead,braindead|wildest,youngB,eastside,rescueme etc.?) I think u shld hv this cliche' chords
Take riff inspiration from (braindead.pre+slowedversion) - literally reference pitch mel' on top of it as [QuadRapB1-B34(Up4), QuadRapB1-B34(Up4).. [LastRound]QuadRapB1-B3] Up1B3 is high note to higher note, the 2 rounds hv diff.pitchs following same as (braindead.pre), Up1B2 is the 'heartache-drop' 2notes lik (emogrl), B1Up2 bass notes.. ..felt 2ndRound pitch mel flows rly fuckin smooth. ..(can also reference onto of emogrl.C2'slowed) to mk the B2Up2's feel rly funky cool swing
FYI (braindead.C1' 4th round B34 guitar pitch) use as the PostC's B2Up2 pitch? a rly peaceful tranquil heavenly pitch. u cn do lik QuadRapB1-B4, QuadRapB1. B1Up1 will b. lik low bass notes Up1 going further down pitch from B1, then jumping up to the 2 high notes of B2Up2, then B4 brings pitch down slightly, both rounds have same QuadRap1 Pitch* - (kinda fits if u reference it on braindead.brdge). kinda lik same as (ulgy) but w diff.pitch
Variations: 1stRound ends w DuoRap B4 of same pitch as B1Up1 // 2ndRound ends w extra +B4 // mid ending w Up34 + ending w B41 lik (emogrl) // or just do QuadRapB1-Up3 w variations of B4/Up4
.. remember it ends w some kinda lick (ulgy,wannab,emogrl,style)
Hv introGuitSolo only in intro?? (lik boislie, cncrt)
Hidden DwnstreamBckgrd guitar mel' in (braindead) C's ending? our song needs hidden C' guitar mel' too?** lik (loverace,style,godsvme,hangovr,mainsrtm..)
Guitar chord strumming up slides outro in (braindead, mainstrm, emogrl?)?
"guitar, reaper" Voc pitch- (mainstrm.brdge, braindead.brdge)
(emogrl) picture ur chords on top of it
- picture 1stRound of riff B34 same pitch as V'Lyr.s corresponding mel'
(mainstrm) B34 vs QuadRapB34 Voc - Guit balance
(godsvme) 1stHalf Riff Uppitch, 2ndHalf Dwnpitch corresponding to the 'lostboy/gothgirl' lyr.s Rounds
Collar leash
C'HamonyLines 'me-eh' pitch in (mainstrm.C')
Ur main reference is now (ulgy)?
Use E Major lik (ulgy) ?
(ulgy-kissmewrldend) QuadRapB1Up3 every round, 4thRound changes pitch Exactly lik (kisswrld), (kissmelikwrldend-cncrt)
But then it wldn't b exactly lik UpPitch GuitSolo then..
For GuitSolo 1st3Rounds Play QuadRapB1 in one go, let Up2 ring out, but the Up3 is lik an added part recorded separately & Up3 is softer volume in 1st&3rdRound almost lik only Round3&4 hv Up3 hits (lik kisswrld)
I think u shld hv B34 every round in VRiff (lik drunkface)
Wait.. (braindead-allinknow-knifeunderpillow-ulgy-miseryb-cncrt-wannab-different-anthem2-chocolate) - I think u need this UpB V'Riff. all the same 3 notes 👈✅ [also means no Breakdown Bridge of (emogrl..)?]
OR u need this RapidStream Riff w highs on B23/24 bc ur 144bpm? (whatage,mrbrght,banyan,mainstrm)
- do tht Rapid stream for 2 Rounds until stop at B4
Just do (emogrl) D Major in 144 bpm .. wait is Dmajor for faster tempos? Just do EMajor 144bpm..
(godsvme) baseline night vibe
(21stvamp,cncrt,anthem2,loverace,godsvme) - character title?
Also bc ur opp.of breakup songs, ur relationship song (FU,maybe,sk8r,boislie,ulgy) - oh, which is lik (hangover,twinflame,whatage,*kissmeworldending*,whyruhere?)** also r uppitchs
Also bc u hv tht chords too which r corresponding 'society' (cncrt,betteroffdead,braindead,godsvme..) which corresponds to the upwards Riff (cncrt,lvituhtme,braindead-allikno) which corresponds to the GuitSolo being Upwards pitch..
-- but ofc.all tht cld b interchangeable (wannabe-emogrl)chords
(wanna) intro Guit Riff
(21stvamp-ulgy bloody-cncrt, lwymmd-ready)
I think u shld hv (loverace,mainstrm) chords (+mainstream cover.erikson's C1')
& V;Riff lik (mrbrght,whatage,banyan) so lik 1stSong's V'chords
I think u sold hv lik (emogrl riff) cause it's the reflection of ur 1stSong's C'GuitLead
U need the sunset chords from 1stsong lik (godsvme,emogrl,style,mrbrght)
Lik 1stsong's unreleased outro?
(cncrt) V2' also hs (bloody.V2)'s Harmony Guitar Pluck Chords B1s
I mean there r only so many chords tht fit this song structure..(cncrt=godsvme=banyan, emogrl, FU=whatsage)
Changing chords every round (banyan,whatsage,cncrt|boislie,ulgy etc.) - hs the arp.riffs .. every 2 rounds (godsvme,emogrl,mainstrm) - hs the long Riffs <--u need the long riffs
- is there a diff.btwn the note going up/down?
IntroGuit- use (emogrl/hangvr/whtsage.brdge) as the 2 notes for (boislie,sk8r,ulgy,|cncrt,maybe) ?
..I dont think u shld hv 3rdsong as CultRock cause it won't b big prod.lik Weddingangeldemn
It sold smthn sparse (ay,americasweethrt,myex..)
'wedding for cults' Jesus parody + DwnBChords
--------------------
The whole theme of V2' is = someone wanting to control u but u rebel**
Half is cliche'grounded in reality version of V1's theme/scene & sum up - visual scene words
Half is cliche' directly reflect lyr.s as C'. - cliche phrases
^^Both Halves r listing contained w their own respective half
^^Halves in 2Line segments
Third person perspective addressing 'you'
+'brainwash/minderaser/soldsoul' *give someone control 'belief'?
+hs *big words but not fantasy-words
- opp.s in 1st2Lines
Half is Opp.s in 1st 2 lines w V1' + almost same sentence starters
Half is Throwing list of complaints/criticisms of 'outside sources'
So the 1st2Lines hv to b a coherent story/scene, lets start from there.. what is the story? (cncrt,godsvme,loverac)
Idk. fuck.-- bad-situation life/relationship sum up? rebel? & 2ndHalf is 'action'?
1stLine hv meaning of 'u fell in love'? no? it hs to b opp.? "u didn't fall"?
..ok so it's definitely expanding on the V1's 1stline cause V1's 1st+2ndLine r the lines tht were just listing randomly-ish & 1stLine was the out of context one, now just add context to it in V2' 1stHalf
- keyword is "guitar" or "heartstring"?
No..
They r in lyr.groups (loverace,emogrl,ulgy*, hngovrcur). .im just gon base it on guitriff V'?
- 1- aesthetic accessory
- 2- 'someone tells me smthn'
Still 1st Line starting w "i.." & 2ndLine "she says.."?
2ndHalf switch mel' u cld b lik (godsvme.V2' | emogrl,boislie.V1',ay.C')
"choker/eyeliner/ring"? "drum break"? "black parade/band" ?
"I fell in love.. she says dont fall in love/we're falling down"?
(emogril,style) hs "drive" , (loverace) hs 'wedding'
It's smthn diff.from the rest of the song =- is it /determined by shared chords?
Oh, sum up of whole relationship? (ulgy.V2',cncrt.V2')
& surely enough (ulgy.V2') 1stLine also an aesthetic accessory
"I/u sing w a choker on / she's singing w a choker / singer ..choker"? "black/short skirt" "black nails" "tee" "hair/nosepiecred/earings" "doll"? "black wings"? "curse"?/"promise"
"black paint stain on me"? - or u cld just say "u showed up in.."?
U need all listing? (title track,mainstrm,emogrl, | ulgy) not just a 1 Line lik (lovrac)
No no thats not right u need to continue telling the *story (sk8r,boislie*,bornhorns?graduation.mgk "the past stuck on me till the future - ur gone + bad stains of u/the past following me around" >< lovrace "stuck on u - want to keep u for the future but can't bc of the past")
"stuck on me/u" + "past"
(loverqace,emogrl,maybe) all hv tht same V2' 2ndHalf mel'switch of EvenlySpaced cause feature artists, so ur mel' switch up is in bridge meaning r V2' is just straight listing past the whole section? (mainstream)
"falling" "forever"?*
- 2ndLine's implying a more artistic narrative
- "falling"for 2ndHalf
"curse"??
(mainstream-titletrck) - 'title track' V2'hate'Listing
(godsvme-lvoerace) - 'motion' lyr.s + 'runaway's V2'-C'
(cncrt)
(boislie)- 'why u lie'
All the Dwndwndwnupupup?
(boislie,sk8r,21vamp, shelvsdrugs,ulgy?style,forgetmetoo?wildest,woods?ilikeme, drugdlr?)
R u not doing the repeating story 2x for bridge?
Or at least it's repeating some version of tht? (sk8r)
So u cld still repeat V1' 2x for bridge (loverc,godsv)
But r u not having the 'runaway' theme?
(boislie, sk8r, shelvsdrugs, woods..) bridge is still just listing complaints/scene. so yea it's lik the same thing as (loverace) but they're diff. song types?
That's my concern. song types. if u rly compare (sk8r) w (loverace, godsvme) though.. (21stvamp? boisloie?)
(sk8r, boislie) they're just restating the V1' again in diff.lyr.s - lik plot-twist lyr.s (+getawaycar)? but is boy/girl opp.s
(loverace>godsvme) = (sk8r>boislie)
Lik how (emogrl) repeats it's C' as Brdge cause it's character-lyr. being repeated. also they're doing this cause their cliche'*characters that's also pop-py, & since u used (loverace) basic.ly lyr.s u sold just repeat in bridge 2x lik so
- but problem, (loverace) hs diff.lyrs before C1' & before LastC'. & so does (sk8r, godsvme, boislie, loverace)
So u need a cliche'love-half section lik need it right after V1'. pre?
"I.." half-section after the story?
NO! remember lik (21vamp, mainstream, forgetmtoo | lwymmd, drugsintrnt)
- so u shold just hv a short 1/2 Line bridge - 'someone'+'don't hv a heart/soul/nobody'[& hs to b cliche'?] + implying fantasy-bad 'hell?' [1 Line cliche' + 1 Line artistic-fantasy?]. ^almost lik a continuation of V2'^
- so lik (loverace) pre'? -'wthout u' (boislie)-'u nvr tell the truth' (cncrt)- 'get me off this rollercoaster'
Ok that's fine w me cause (mainstream/emogrl) also had V1'scene never repeated -
- this is where u cn put "summon the black parade" ? - so smthn to do w 'black parade'? lik (cncrt)>?- & + need to say ur 'overemotional' lik (godsvme,cncrt,loverace)?
"nothing/dead inside"? alone? im/we're falling down? without wings*?
"close ur eyes say my name summon the black parade"
I/u can't (even) fly
Take off/clip/cut ur wings?
U lost ur wings and I summoned the black parade?
U lost ur wings now we're falling down
When u lost/e ur wings..
Learn how to fly?
I said too much now / screaming we're falling down?
Forever? feel? in the end?
In the end im dead inside / we're falling down / an angel lost it's/her wings
>> ? (I'll) break my heart in two, half of it's for u / take half of it with u
Start Bridge w lik (mainstream.brdge) 's "Owww" ? or put tht after 'lost wings'/'break heart'
In the end(?) an angel lost her wings, we're falling down..
I'll break my heart in two, take half of it with you /just to b w u / gv half of it to u
/oww, u broke my heart in two, and took half of it with you
..& now I hv urs too
- but I don't think u cn hv tht line cause cliche' ; ur not lik (21vamp) cause it's swapped cliche'Brdge but character C'
U need to hv 'angel'? does it hv to b out of context too?
- but it's lik u already hv the characters needed in the song lyr.s, it's in V'
But I think ur good w that. lik (21vamp,ulgy)
- I think only one line is enough, otherwise it distracts the line (+loverace)
I don't think its smthn for u to decide cause lik (mainstream-drugsinternet, cncrt-godsvme)
(without, boislie) bridge
(loverace?/ulgy/boislie/wndrlnd/sk8r)? - well they all hv "in the end.. / the end / how the story ends"
This is the end + destiny + ending that hoped for but didn't happen
*it's a bad ending
"this is how the/tht story ends" + "angel/falling"
I think ur type is (lover, ulgyume, graduation.mgk/juicewrld), bout bridge b lik "vow.." "final words" - not rly lik a sum up but lik a sum up ode to the future
+smthn 'written'? (+frgtmtoo) - & hs to b directly reflection of TitleLine : Vows* & since ur C' is the actual 'vow' words, u just need to mention it as a "vow" in C'. - u cld say "vow".. or u cld b lik "close ur eyes, say my name"?
Final words/say a few words
Cast a spell/curse
Read a/(written)in the book/fairyytale/story(book)/myth/history/legend
- I think they only use 'story ends' in the cliche' ones? (sk8r,boislie,bornhorns*, sorta loverace), so use this? esp.ly since ur also V' telling a 'once upon a time' story
+:"forever"? // Only need "in this story" + "bad ending"? (born horns,ulgy ~sk8r)
Use (boislie) mel' brdge w the AAB & (ulgy) rhyme scheme. so u cn put "story" on B12. "happy"? "the end"? "heavy"?
"-the end of/to our story, write another for me" "..the end of me-ee / worthy" "..fantasy/poem/destiny/written in prophecy..kiss me"? "/..I knew that we're destiny / (iknewtht) our story's a prophecy from the moment/daythat/second u kissed/met me, the life of u is the death of me"
[in lik perspective of Snow White kiss?]
Or don't use (boislie) B12's then..
Don't use 'story' & put 'prophecy' in 1stLine
Use (lwymmd.C') mel'? "the prophecy is true, I/u broke my heart in two, ..& took half of it w u"
No.. use 'story'?
-
Gotta figure out the bridge mel'? - (mainstream,boislie,ulgy,21vamp,forgettoo,shelvsdrgs,ilikeme)
- it's supposed to b a reflection of the C's mel' layout
- is it lik ABAB?
- is it variation combination of Dwndwndwnupupup + QuadRapids <- it is v.reliant on tht
- but if ur only a pure DwnDwnDwnupupup C' then u need tht AAB [B= A but in constant stream-version] (ulgy,shelvdrgs,ililkme,boislie,21vamp,LWYMMD.C')?
- but (ulgy, boislie) hs Vs' mel' also as AAB
So do lik (boislie-mainstrm) ABAB
Or shit u need it? (boislie.pre'_)
"our story is a prophecy, that "
No I honestly don't think u need a new bridge at all.. (loverace, emogrl, godsvme)
U just need to think of it as a post C'? -
The end of our story / the end is near im sorry
No no.. do 'prophecy' instead of story
- 'only/lonely' "(this is/this''ll b/wrote) the end of you & me, ..it's (written in / it's in) our prophecy / the end of you & me is written in (the) prophecy " (boislie.mainstrm)
<-- it's liter.ly just restating the C' that's what I mean we don't need new bridge. - just need lik 1 cliche line lik (21vamp, born horns,graduation)
"tell me why"? (frgtmtoo,boislie)
So shld there b smthn lik tht for u?
+*(godsvme.C'.SidNancy.Outro) - same type of line as ur "black parade.." line?
Does (+loverace) hv one too? so we cn confirm it's a character "You/Me" story ting?
Outta my head?
- so don't put in 'black parade?
Put tht line as outro lik (mainstrm)? +since also the 'anniversary' in C' implies celebration, as does 'parade'*
- no but mel' wise, it's much better to b in front of C'
So put it last line brdge lik (cncrt.C', LWYMMD)
- & we'll use 'heart' to replace 'wings' & 'blackparde/myname' to 'angel'
"I'll break my heart in two, take/keep half of it with you
Close ur eyes & say my name to summon the black parade" ?
OR u cld hv the "close ur eyes & say my name"as Dwndwndwnupupup? OR as 1st half upbeats from B3 then 'summon..' quadrupeds then upbeats from B1'
OH! we cld put 'we're falling' in V2'?? lik (angeldemns)? even though its a bit lik (loverace, godsvme) 'motion'lyr.s? or even though still.. it makes sense cause from 'falling' to 'deathofme' in a literal sense since it's V2' grounded in reality still makes sense +(godsv,loverace) both still hv a diff.section in.btwn before C'
"u broke my heart in two took half of it w u" in V2'?
I heard a drum break over a heartache
Saymynameinvain / put ur hands together / Close your eyes, say my name
Summon the black parade
..
Im a punk?
"u can / please choke/kill me slowly (w ur bare hands)"
..(from the moment u) kissed me?
[Chorus]
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love
We're going down, I'm calling out
God save me I'/we're falling in love
[Outro]
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love (I'm falling in love [B2QuadRapidB3DuoRapidB1])
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love
God save me, I'm falling in love (I'm falling in (love) [B2QuadRapidB3B1])
BPM: 144
Key: D Major
(MainstremSlt/emogirl/**boislie) & C' Drums mel' of (Mainstreamsllut/boislie)? & V'Claps B2Up2B4 (boislie)?
